“It’s bad enough your father is entertaining vampires, Kele. We don’t need any more vermin within the den.” Jerked from the ground by her hair, Susan was dragged across the floor by Mother. Pain shot into the roots of her scalp while she scrambled to support some of her weight on her legs. “My daughter took too many liberties in offering you shelter. You’ll need to find another den to take you in.”
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17 comments:
Mom's got attitude and Susan's got trouble. Great six, Annie!
Oh wow. Really mean to her. Really makes me want to know whats going on!
Mother is a biotch. That said, I hope your revisions are going well. :)
Wow. Bad mother! Hope Susan figures out a way out of this! Great six!
Oh wow!
That mother seems like a pleasant person.....!
Great six.
ooo, like it, Annie. Great six!
Guess it could have been worse. Mother could have eaten the "vermin."
Wow, this is intense! Good job, Annie.
So many questions. great job!
Talk about attitude. Someone should slap mom upside the head
Oooo tension...I love it!!!
Nice job! I'll bet she does just fine without Mother's "help"
Ouch! Sure hope that "vermin" is not the hero!
Mean, or what? Oh..I want to read on to find out what happens next :) Great six
My guess is the mother does not like unexpected guests?
Whoa, that's one bad-ass mom! Looking out for her children? Or just bad?
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